Monday, February 1, 2010

A Fiction story: Get Money in Las Vegas

When I was waking up me and my brother was at Las Vegas and it was at night so we went and sneak into a casino and was fooling people with our costume. so now I was trying to gamble and I got money but I went in the back and steel some money to get what I wanted and me and my brother put on another clothe and get the money for free. They all think that I was working there but I got as much money I could and go to the store and bought what ever I but I got more expansive gear that could use for safety.

3 comments:

Chris said...

Duc,

People will not understand that this is a story! People who read this blog might think that you really did this! If you are going to write stories on your blog, then you need to make sure that your readers know that you are writing a fiction story!

~ Mr. Moore

Kyle said...

do you like las Vegas because I do I love las Vegas how did you get there?

Vlad said...

Dear Duc,

This is awesome! Your fiction story is off to a good start. I think this story is going to be cool. I hope you will get good ideas for this story. I can't wait to read your story, fiction story. Have fun!

Your friend,
Vlad

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